Sunday 30 September 2018

Pirate Stories

Wow, what a time we have had making our pirate stories. The children have relished making them look old and like scrolls by using tea and ripping them.

Here are the stories in their digital form for you to enjoy.

Mr Hall





The Ship jacking

Ben and Jack worked at a boat yard. They were billing and panting there boat, “come on ben we need to get back to the Palace said jack” I’m coming “said ben. They bolted to the palace,” but before they could get in the door they heard a boat sail away in the rough blue water.

 They darted back to the boat yard. They saw the top of the sail boat. They got on their rowing boat


They got to the inn and got off their boat Ben went to find the robber mean weal best boat jack rifled   pistol and food mean while Ben was stuck in a fight agents the thief ben hit him so  hard  he got knocked out. Then BEN lugged   thief onto the rowing boat. Then jack paddled to the boat yard 

They smeared their boat .brown and White and made the interior  black and brown .they got the BIGEST man they could find no one Stole their boat again
By Ben  



The stolen gem
“Jon, Edward, come here quickly!” shouted Sapphire (their master.)
”Look, pirates are coming, quick , hide. ”But before she could hide it was too late.
“No Jon, Edward. help me!” screamed the Princess.
“Let her go you thief!” Begged Jon
“Argh! Never you barnacle! Throw her in the galleon!”
“Who are you?” asked Edward.
“Why I’m brad but you call me black beard brad see you later you scurvy dog.”
The horrid pirates sailed across the harsh, dark sea.
“What are we going to do?” asked Edward. 
“We have to follow them and get the princess back,” Replied Jon
“But we don’t know where they are going,”   Said Edward
“Well according to my compass they are heading for South America, all we need to do is build a galleon, hire a captain, and set off to South America,”  Said Jon
“Ok let’s begin. “

So Jon and Edward started to build a galleon extremely quickly, they needed cannons to defend themselves and a kitchen to supply food. After they finished the galleon they hired a captain. They hoped he is good as they set sail to America.

On their way they saw another pirate galleon
“Uh oh pirates! those skeleton pirates chill my blood they do,” They’ve been looting my old galleon for years they have.”
Said the captain “ARM THE CANNONS!” barked Jon.
They got the cannons ready to fire.
“Three….two…..one…..FIRE!” Bellowed Edward
BOOM! They blew the galleon right open.
“It worked it’s sinking the galleon well, that was easy.” Said   Jon in happiness
“Okay matey lets go find your princess.” Replied the captain and they carried on their journey.
“Finally we’ve caught up to them.” Said Edward
They tried going faster so that their cannons would reach from their angle, “Ready? Three, two, one, fire!” boomed Oliver. “Dang it! Missed it by that much,” hitting himself on the leg in disappointment.

The pirates realised that they were getting shot at. “Lower the plank!” thundered Blackbeard Brad.
On the middle of the plank Blackbeard Brad and John got out their pistols. “Looks like your end is here laddie,” bragged Blackbeard Brad.
Click.
“Ahhhh!! Out of ammo,” moaned Blackbeard  Brad.
“You’re gone you scurvy dog!” smirked John.
Click.
“Ahhh! Out of ammo.” Sighed John.
“Guess it’s a sword fight,” said  John.
As Blackbeard Brad’s crew, John and Oliver’s crew fought they were all humming, “dun dun, dada dun dun dada dun dun, dada dun.” repeatedly
20 minutes later
“Jon get back and drooped the plank!” bawled Edward
So Jon ran back with the princess and released the plank into the water
“What are you doing?” questioned Jon
“I am going to shoot a cannon at the ship so it will break the bottom of the galleon so it will sink the galleon.” Replied Edward
Unavoidably, the cannonball smashed through the bottom of the galleon and it sunk the ship quickly soon after the ship had sunk they started to head home.

At home they could live the life they loved and keep it like that forever.
By Connor


The Skeli-Ship
Jason took the newly brought beer to the sad, wazy man. Then Connor fetched a hot-meat to the man and sat down.
“Are you okay?” questioned Connor.
The man didn’t answer.
Connor backed off.
“I don’t think we can trust this guy,” said Connor.
Suddenly a man burst in with skeletons screaming, “Get back here!”
Then the sad, wazy man leapt up and pulled out a pistol and shot a skeleton in the head.
“W…What’s happening?” shouted Jason.
As Jason and Connor ran to the back of the bright-incrusted rock room, where they had hidden gems in a chest, they heard fighting and shouting for over 16 hours, they took a rest.
“WHAT!!!” roared Jason.
All the treasure was gone. Connor jumped up, looked around. They burst through the door and saw the skeletons getting away with the treasure. This is where it all starts.
“Get in the ship!” shouted Jason.
Connor leapt on to the ship as the skeleton were drifting away.  Jason and Connor were chasing the skeletons.
As the craggy sea splashed up the old galleon, it snaked around the skeli-ship and smashed in to them.
Connor sprung on to the skeli-ship and stabbed a couple of skeletons. He searched around the ship, looking for treasure…
Just then, Connor and Jason were captured.
The skelis did weird rituals to them. Connor and Jason leapt off the boat.
Just then the skeli-ship moved on top of Jason and Connor. They couldn’t get up! They were drowning! Luckily, they had an idea.
Jason and Connor climbed up the boat and they drifted away. When they got to the quay, they climbed down from the ship and ran into the inn and put the booty on the floor.
“We did it!” screamed Connor and Jason.
By Archie


The treasure!!!!
One day. Alfie and Connor set off on a boat. They said by to their mum, who lived in a palace in Hawaii.
They set off to see the sapphire- blue sea and they went fishing and Connor was wearing a blue leather hat; Alfie was wearing a green hat.
They wanted to go for a swim so they went for a swim in the crystal- clear sea. Connor did a back flip and Alfie was amazed so Alfie tried but failed miserably.
Connor went under water and found a chest stitched to a rock they took the chest to the boat suddenly something happened….!
A pirate was on a boat Connor and Alfie them but they didn’t see Connor and Alfie they all had eyepatches and cutlass and revolvers. Alfie aid to Connor we need to get out of here. Why Connor said worried to his friend Alfie.
“Alfie said there’s a pirate under water.”  So they got off   and got the gems and tried to hide from the pirates but it didn’t work the pirates found them and shot the pistol and hit and hit Alfie in the head but it didn’t kill him he just got knocked out but Connor killed all the pirates and saved Alfie’s life and in the end they become millionaires and plane builders.

By Liam


The Cursed cutlass
BOOM, the cannonball hit the ground like an elephant falling off of the crow’s nest. Captain Jack Cody sprinted through the island Buccaneers Booty holding a seafarers chest. He was struggling to avoid the explosions; his legs buckling under the extreme weight.
 “Jon ready the ship I just plundered this island! We gotta go!” Captain Jack Cody shouted. Speedily, Jack jumped onto the galleon only just avoiding a shot from an angry skele-captain and raised the heavy, brown anchor.                                                                                                 
“So what did you loot matey?!” Jon asked
“Oh, only 1g worth of gold and a greeny, glowy cutlass” he replied whilst drooling greedily over it all. “Set off to Golden Sands Outpost; we need to sell this chest to the Gold Hoarders!” Jon announced.

“Get ready to drop anchor we’re here!” Captain Jack demanded whilst playing with the cutlass, which now had green mist radiating from around it.
“I still don’t think ye should be having this” Jon said, his legs trembling in fear.
“Ah, don’t be silly” Jack replied. With great pleasure, Jack lifted up the golden, gleaming chest and dived into the shimmering, aqua water.
“Hello laddy I bring you a perfect seafarers chest!” Jack expressed to the man. He had an eyepatch, and a mangled overcoat. With ease the man took the chest and gave Jack a brown bag of money. As Jack strutted back to the boat… He stopped dead. His face dropped. He had just spied the sight that sent a dagger down all pirates’ spines.
It was the reaper flag, the red glow gave it away. That flag could only be flown by the ominous Captain Bone Beard
“Ooh I don’t like that skull and cross-bones, it gives me the heebie-jeebies!” Jon quivered.

Smoothly, the shaky skeleton ship did a 90 degree turn and swiftly fired a cursed cannonball at the galleon-immediately sinking Jack’s ship. As quick as a cheetah hunting its prey, Captain Bone Beard himself climbed halfway down the old rusty ladder. His leather boots just skimming the water and snatched the sword from its floating position! “I thought I told you to sell that stupid sword!” Jon screamed, his eyes raging with extreme rage. Jack did not answer His eyes blankly staring into the abyss. Out of the corner of Jacks eye, he spotted a beautiful ship from the Royal Navy! “I know you just want to steal that, I can see it in yeer blood-thirsty eyes, but first we need to know where to go.”
As they strutted into the shaky sea (the Inn) they search rigorously for the bartender: Black eye Billy. Squeezing past brawling men they clutched the old wooden bar.
“Hello there, gimme a pint of yer finest rum,” Jack asked.
“Don’t get distracted!” Jon harshly whispered, knocking tankard out of Jacks hand. “We need to know were Captain Bone Beard is going!” Jon growled in a dark voice.
“Well matey if ye want to know were there going you’ll have to pay me first!” Billy whispered to make sure no other greedy pirates would hear. Menacingly Jack threw some gold coins at Billy’s grubby face.
“They be heading to Rum Runner Isle” Billy replied, whilst putting up with a fat pirate quickly picking up the shimmering gold coins from around his feet.

5 Hours later, they pulled 7up beside the rickety wooden skeleton ship and leapt onto it. They hid behind a powerful, black cannon. They didn’t dare breathe. They spied their chance! Speedily, they slunk into the dusty gunpowder hold were the gold was stored. With a great struggle they heaved open the old, rusty door. Suddenly a golden glow illuminated from within the room. They gasped in amazement. In front of them was a room filled with glowing, gold gauntlets and Shimmering crimson chests but on top of the pile was the thing they were looking for… The mystical cursed cutlass…
Quickly, Jack snatched the green, pulsating sword from the pile and sprinted back to their ship. BANG!!! Captain Jack Cody slipped on a pebble sending it flying and SPARKING down to the GUNPOWDER PILE. they scrambled back to their-own galleon. As they stepped back onto the ship, they heard the ear piercing noise of the skele- crew returning to their ship. Meanwhile, back in the gunpowder hold a spark from the pebble ignited the GUNPOWDER TRAIL! As quick as a mouse running away from a devilish cat, they raised the wooden anchor and set sail. The second the Skele-crew stepped a bone on their Skele-ship… BOOOOOOOMMMM!!! The gunpowder finely blew up! Sending the heavy ship flying into the sky-as if it was a celebration of the skele-crews; death the gold from the hold rained from the sky!

1 Year later, Jack woke up on his massive white bed and threw open the large, grand doors. As he stepped onto his balcony he knew something was wrong. He turned around. Jack was looking town the gullet of a skele-captains musket!
By Alfie 




The Diamond Stealers
Lady Vanessa and John, lived in an inn. They were born there with their mother and father. They had two places to live in. they lived in an inn and a beautiful palace. They had two pet horses, but one day they got kidnapped by evil, fierce pirates. Lady Vanessa and John heard their horses go neigh.
They were crying just until they got on the pirate ship.  Their neigh faded. Lady Vanessa said to john, “Go and get out special horses. Why aren’t you moving? Go after them cute horses right now!” Lady Vanessa mumbled.
“We need them cute horses now! If we go and get one of them back we can ride the other one. So let’s go and get the other one,” Lady Vanessa sobbed.
When she got onto the back of the horse. The other horse was still on the boat.
When they got on the boat, they snuck into the berth and found the other horses. Sadly, they got caught out.
When the pirates caught them out, they announced, “What are you doing here? Are you supposed to be here?”
“This is my horse!” remarked Lady Vanessa “a “Why have you stolen my other horse. When I get my horses back I am going to keep them somewhere secret for once, so you ugly pirates could not get my lovely horses.”
“What about if we have a fight?” the caption mumbled. So  see who can get the horses back,” The pirate said.
“If we get them. We can have a party,” said Lady Vanessa.  “Let’s go and get our horses back!”
“Let’s see who has got a better ship,” said Lady Vanessa.
When the captain saw that he babbled, “I have a better ship. I will go and get my ship,”
They went to go and get their ship and the other pirates said, “Lady Vanessa’s ship is much better! We’re all going on John and Lady Vanessa’s ship.”
They all had a look on the galleon. They asked if they could live on it. John mumbled, “Yes you can indeed live on this ship. If you want to,” gasped John “YES!”
“Why are you going on their boat,” whispered the pirate,
“What are you doing?”  Questioned the pirate. “They are very naughty, ”  shouted  the captain.
So the other pirates said, “We are going to sneak on your boat. But before we do, we are going to get your treasure back,” the nice pirates said.
When they got the treasure and the diamonds they were out of the ship and went on the Lady Vanessa’s ship.
Lady Vanessa and John got their treasure back as well as their horses.
    
                                         By L



Captain Jon was a land and the attend is filled with sand, and trees.

Captain Jon built the deck , and Captain Jon was rich and he has as he finish the deck den he wet too his friend. Wen the gold felt of the poked is a how the poked we is gold goo! Captain shalt at his friend “You are let away your are late.” He floodway  and the Captain Jon.

I found a gold and a big money  ay will gaze a gold to girl.

He found a legend sword , He could ase dis sword, yes!

He got the sowed ,nah he is there strong and sword is gaoling either in direction!

Attack the pirates and attack the deck shw Captain Jon ay hill attack S, AHHHH gif your deck orate you

By Kacper


  
The treasure map
Liv slammed the door of the pretty palace with Megan following her.
“What’s the matter sister?” asked Megan.
“I…I… lost my precious necklace,” explained Liv.
Mrs Dove rushed down the hallway wondering what the noise was.
Mrs Dove asked Liv and Megan to go to their bedroom and calm down. Whilst the girls calmed down in their bedroom, Liv was painting an amazing detailed picture of an old imaginary ship.

Later that evening, Liv and Megan got out of the pretty palace and went on a walk on the scorching hot beach to calm them down.
“I can’t believe that Mrs Dove sent us to our room for us to calm down,” snapped   Megan.
“Ah ah,”   groaned Liv.
“What’s the matter?” questioned Megan.
“There’s something sparkling over there and it’s hurting my eyes,” answered Liv.
They crept over to the sparkling thing and snatched it out of the crystal clear sea. They took the pristine cork out of the bottle and grabbed the paper out of it and untied the ribbon around it. They opened the piece of paper and they saw an old map.

A few hours later, Liv and Megan boarded a galleon. They handed the rusty map over to the captain. Liv and Megan announced to the captain “We are looking for treasure”.
The captain stood in silence.

As soon as they arrived, they moored their galleon. Liv caught something in the corner of her eye. She showed Megan, but by the time Megan looked over, they were gone “Anyway, “gasped Liv.
It took ten minutes to find the location of the gleaming treasure. Finally they reached the destination of the glittery treasure. As they found the treasure they heaved the dazzling treasure “One two three,” counted Megan.

They climbed into the galleon and sailed away. As quick as a flash Boom. As a cannon ball hit the ancient ship Boom Boom   Crack crack as the cannon balls hit the ship.

Until the nasty pirates ran out of ammo. The cruel pirates all gathered together, “Come here mateeys!” called the captain.
“Let’s throw our cutlasses at the galleon,” explained the evilest pirate.
“No let’s let them sail away and we’ll trick them to come back” whispered another evil pirate. Eventually they made a decisions. They threw the shiny cutlasses, but missed “Now what?” asked the captain.
“My plan,”   begged the wicked pirate.

As soon as they moored the ship (back at home), the girls ran in with the treasure and the girls opened the chest “Ahhh,” hummed Megan in joy. In the chest was gold coins, rubies, crystals, gems and deep in the bottom was Liv’s necklace “My precious necklace, “bawled Liv. That minute Liv unlocked the chain on her precious necklace and slowly put it around her neck.

Liv put her necklace on non-stop for the next two years and Megan walked to the bakery every day. A Few minutes later Liv and Megan rushed down the hallway into their room and organised their gems, rubies, money and diamonds on and on.
  
By Gracie



The Runaway Thief

“RUN ED RUN!” screamed Lady Daphne as they ran towards the dead quiet pub. She rapidly flung the key out of her pocket she rushed herself so much she dropt the key and Red Ruby grabbed the key hastily .lucky Ed had a spare key they got in without Red Ruby hearing them. Red Ruby was the evilest pirate on the cove and wanted revenge. Red Ruby left with a glare. Ed trembled with fear, she will come back to get us….

As she left, something fell out of out of Red Ruby’s pocket. Lady Daphne knew straight away what it was. ”Ed look. The map she stole from us when we were children,” she said in astonishment!
Suddenly a storm hit the pristine pub. Ed cried out in disappointment, because that was an ancient pub that was passed down to him from generations that was his treasure. Both of them sailed away on their galleon.

They looked at the map and set off to their destination. Their first place to go was an unknown castle which looked like a mole’s den from far-far away. It would take them two whole weeks just to get there in time. They luckily had enough food to get there.

Finally as they got to the unknown mystical castle, Ed got off the boat and a sneaky, evil and ancient pirate grabbed Lady Daphne and threatened Ed as well as his wife.
“Let her go!” demanded Ed instantly.
Lady Daphne got free and put her bandanna on the pirate eyes so Ed could kill the pirate. Ed killed the pirate with his silver and shiny cutlass and shouted for joy.

Ed said in relief “. I am glad he is dead. He could off caused a lot of damage”. They both agreed with each other.
They both sailed away happily to the never ending sea.

By Ebony



Black Beard’s revenge

Black beard was standing in the berth of his micro ship:  the squid. Black beard was known across the land as the most viscous pirate. He wore a red coat and a cross bone hat and a giant pointy beard.
Captain Black Beard was hunting for Captain Small as he killed Captain Black Beard’s younger brother. They were sailing to the Turbulent Typhoon on Cutlass Island.

At the old inn, Black Beard saw Captain Small and his crew. He shouted, “I wanna kill you!”
Captain Small ran as fast as a cheetah to the blue, icy ocean. Captain Blackbeard trailed after him and shouted, “You’ve got nowhere to run!”
They jumped over Captain Small to their own ship which anchored to the pirate’s boat and set sail home. Then Captain Small jumped into the cold ocean and drowned.
Captain Blackbeard went back to his galleon. He was happy to get revenge.

By Ethan


The Mysterious Map
Thanks John, see you tomorrow,” said the wide, ginger-headed man as he left bakery. The bakery was John’s and Max’s, they were brothers aged at twenty years old. They were both sadly orphaned when they turned sixteen so they took over the family bakery. The two brothers were very close because they only had each other. They had just closed the small, humble bakery because it was supposed to blustery, raging night.
The next day, as soon as John looked out, he could see the devastation that the previous night had caused. He went down stairs and saw Max already baking some bread.
“What time should we open?” asked Max when he saw his brother walking through the bakery.
“Ummmmmmmm… 10 am as normal I think,” replied John as he opened the door.
Their morning went very slowly as not many costumers came after the storm. But at 12 am a strange man with a peg-leg and a long dark coat came in. “What would you like sir?” asked John as the loud bell rang from the door.
“Just a small loaf of bread,” he said in a quiet hoarse voice.
“Here you go,” said John as he gave the man a loaf and took the man’s money. John looked up and the man had gone, then he looked down and realised. This isn’t money! This is a map!
“Maaaaaaaaaaaaxx!” John said slowly “Look at this! “He exclaimed.
 Max and John decided they needed to follow the old map and find the (hopefully) glistening treasure.
The next day they went down to the docks and talked to a Captain. His name was Captain Red Blood. He told them that he would help them as long as he got 25% of the treasure. They hoped it was real. Was it?
 After a long time, they finally reached Paradise Island! But there was a problem. It was huge. It was a gigantic island!
“This might take a while,” John muttered to himself. SNAP! Max’s leg suddenly broke into two pieces, he had fallen over a sharp rock. “Owwwwww!” Max screamed at the top of his voice. So, there expedition was longer than they thought it would take, with someone having to stay with Max at all times.
But one day John was digging and saw something, “What is this?” he asked himself as he pulled it out of the ground. It was an old chest!
“Guys come look at this” he shouted, covered in sweat the crew gathered round the chest. John opened up the ancient chest. The treasure was amazing. It shined in the golden sun. Everyone was amazed at the sight of the treasure.
“Amazing” exclaimed Max hopping over.
Everyone felt relieved after finding the treasure so they rested on Paradise Island for a few days. After extra rest, Max’s leg had fixed itself so everyone was ready to go home. So they boarded the galleon, and set sail. How much would he make? Would anyone steal it? Thoughts rushed through John’s anxious mind.
“John…John, come look at this...” whispered Max. They tiptoed down to the galleon. And slipped under the ship’s wheel. John could hear voices. They were impatient and quiet. John looked up from their crouch position and could see the crew around the table.
“Ye shouldn’t give the two boy any treasure!” whispered Archie the right hand man, to Captain Red Blood. There was a whole table of nodding men around him.
”What should we do?” John asked Max as they squatted down.
“Ummmmmmmm…” I think should steal the treasure,” replied Max still squatting. John agreed that it was a good idea. They both silently snuck up to the crow’s nest and continued normally.
Later that night, John and Max crept down to the treasure. They silently opened the door and slid in. CRASH! The door collided with John and Max then it plunged to the floor.  
“SOMEONE’S BROKEN IN!” the captain’s voice ran through the galleon. John and Max could hear heavy footsteps and shouting above them.
“RUUUUUUUNN!” shouted Max as he pulled the chest up the stairs and turned the sharp bend. Suddenly, they were cornered by the crew, “Matey ‘ye weren’t stealing our treasure were ‘ye?” questioned Captain Red Blood, loading his pistol, “Ye’ are a gonner boys” laughed Captain Red Blood, ready to shoot.
As quick as a flash, John grabbed onto a rope and swung, holding on to Max who was clasping tight onto the treasure,
“AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!” screamed Max gliding through the air “LAND IN THE JIG!” he shouted at John. They jumped into gig as a storm stared raging behind them.
They looked back at the boat and it had nearly sunk, it would soon be a ship-wreck!
“Looks like we escaped just in time,” exhaled Max turning around to face John.
After a while, John and Max reached their homeland; Golden Sand Island. They had a chest filled with treasure and went to cash it in at the gold hoarders. They were rich! They had expanded their small, humble bakery to a gigantic, magnificent bakery in the centre of the town. One day a man came into the new bakery and said this,” You have found my treasure and now the incredible story is complete.”  

By George     






Friday 14 September 2018

What a start!

Wow! What a marvellous start to the year we have had in Panthers class. The children have impressed me with their maths skills and story writing. We have been writing pirate stories this week and will be finishing and editing them next week. I'll be posting them on our class blog next week.

In our class we have been celebrating mistakes and each week the children have been picking the best mistake made by a class member that has helped them to learn how to do something. Each week they will appear on our class noticeboard so you can see who has helped our class to learn.

The children have also been discussing how we can help each other learn and how we can make the most of our time in our Workshop of Learning.



Mr Hall